The Crystal Caves

As a writing task the children were asked to write a story describing the cave or their exploration of the cave in this picture, this is where their imaginations lead them.

I am exploring a cave and I can see some crystals, I can see some more rocks.

Noah

I ‘m in a cave made out of crystals.  There are bats.  The bat is black.  There are zombies in the cave.  The zombies eat snails and slugs and worms.  There are hundreds of zombies.

Ruben

I walked through the cave, it was like night but it was only lunch time.  Ice was dripping and falling on to the spiky rocks.  The reflection was deep as the sea and the rocks were as spiky as crystals.  Bats were flapping their wings.  I could see thousands of ice cubes.

Keira

I walked into the dark dark cave.  I saw bats hanging on the entrance.  On the other side there was fire.  I had rope and I tied a knot to a crystal in the middle of the cave.  The other side of the fire crystals fell on me.  I had a bandage.  I escape out of the back

entrance, back home.

Thomas

I  found a secret cave.  I was looking for treasure.  I couldn’t see, it was too dark.  I was swapping the treasure for the crystals.  I could see an amazing thing.

Bradley

I have a cave, on top it has snowflakes and crystals.  I love the snowflakes.  There are giant rocks and great big rocks.

Eve

I am exploring a crystal cave.  I found a crystal on the roof and it was white and blue.  I found my way out.

Jewels

 I walked into a dark, dark cave, it was as dark as space.  Ice splashing into the water.  Bats were hanging.  I saw eyes on the walls and I heard creaking noises.  There were crystals on the ground, sparkling greens and blues.  The cave is like a different world that is made of crystals and ice.  But I have to find a way out, by digging a hole.

Jasmine

If I went in a cave I would see heaps of rocks and sharp icicles.  I would see deep water.  I think its in a cave.

Gabriella

 If I was an explorer, I wouldn’t be scared because I am brave.  I saw a snake that was scary and that is when I got scared.

Zoe

I went in a cave I would see a boulder. I would see lots of sharp icicles. I would see water. It is blue and it is deep.

Kyla

 I went in a cave with Lucia and it was very dark and it had snow flakes. I saw big rocks.  The shape of the rocks were circles, the colour was blue.

Shaun

 We drove into a dark, dark cave. I heard bats flapping there wings. We were scared. I walked further. “No Shawn!” said mum as I walked further and further. I got more scared. Bats saw me they poked and they jabbed at me.

Shawn

The cave was dark.

Dion

 I went through a dark tunnel. It was very dark and when I got out, I saw boulders. The boulders were brown and beside me. I saw lots of ice and I saw a shark, it was stuck to the ice.

Matt

I am in the cave.
I see sharks made of ice and a happy face.

Crystal

 I am an explorer. I found crystals. The crystals were different colours. I polished the crystals. They were

beautiful.

Emelia

I found a cave and I made lots of things for it. I made a booby trap and I saw a spiky rock inside. A bird made a funny black rock thing on top of the cave.

Molly

 I went through a dark tunnel and it was dark not dark, very, very dark. In the cave it has crystals. In the cave it has rocky rocks too.

Lucia

I was walking in the dark, dark cave,

icicles were smashing in the water and they were shining. The rocks were like meteors. When I was in there  I was wet and soggy, I did not have goggles. Then I saw bats and they were   black.   I was in a fire cave, it was like dinosaur cove. I could see blue and fire. I could not get out of the cave with icicles. I decided I would make a hole and get out.

Harriet

I walked into a dark, dark cave.
It was dark as space. Water was dripping, bats hanging and silent, ice mountains and spiky rocks sinking into the blue water. I just walked out of the cave, it was an amazing world, the ice was sharp as a knife. The world looked like the North Pole. It was winter that was turning into summer. I walked further then I saw crystals on the sharp floor. I picked up the crystals, I put them in a container. Then I saw a fire. I ran to the cave but there were bats sleeping. I ran to the hole at the side it lets you out. I had to wait until the fire was out from the water splashing up.

Quinn

I walked into a cave it was as dark as space. Icicles were crashing, crystals dropping on rocks that look like fire. I walked into a colourful world, it is awesome. It felt like monsters were tiptoeing behind me.  When
I was walking I heard water dropping and splashing. I heard bats chattering to each other. Now that I am in the cave I am going to look for treasure.

Alicya

I walked into a dark, dark cave, it was as dark as space. Shadow monsters and witches creeping with me. Icicles crashing! Smashing! I walk into a wonderful world that I can explore. I might find treasure because there are crystals and everything is shiny. I walked carefully because when the crystals fall on the gooey, ooey mud they get stuck. Years and years ago the mud got old and the mud splattered into the ground. The reason I walked carefully because the crystals were sharp. I got out my knife and I looked for sharp ends of crystals to collect and use as knives. I got a little bit tired, so I got my light out that was as bright as the sun. When I shone it, it lit up the room. I saw the exit. I ran and ran but almost fell down an enormous cliff. It was 10 metres high, so I had to put my yellow climbing belt on. Luckily there was a little hole in the rock beside me. So I hooked my belt on it. Then I jumped back off the rock. It felt like clip and climb. When I got to the very bottom, I saw my house. It would only take 5 minutes to get back. When I got back home, I smelt my favourite meal. It was Lasagne, Yum!

I woofed it up and then I brushed my disgusting teeth. Then I went to my comfortable bed.

Goodnight!

Ashtyn